I like that transition as well; and the faces are all nicely differentiated.
Also, I like Peggy's dress, and that she wore it for herself.
I know what you mean re: not just the Bechdel test. When I write scenes with women in it, even when it's from a woman's POV/when the woman is the narrator, I ask myself if this is about her or just a way to get information across/move the plot forward (i.e., am I passing the lampshade test?). And in some instances (e.g., when the story is m/m) it's taken me a few tries to get it right.
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Date: 2019-06-23 05:31 pm (UTC)Also, I like Peggy's dress, and that she wore it for herself.
I know what you mean re: not just the Bechdel test. When I write scenes with women in it, even when it's from a woman's POV/when the woman is the narrator, I ask myself if this is about her or just a way to get information across/move the plot forward (i.e., am I passing the lampshade test?). And in some instances (e.g., when the story is m/m) it's taken me a few tries to get it right.